Evaluation of your blog so far.

So far, I think that my blog has been looking good. Although I do believe that it has some potential for creativity to jump out at the reader some more. I have taken the advice from the professor when it comes to adding visuals. As a reader, I know that when I am reading a blog, it is important that there is some type of visual that pops out to me. Therefore, I am able to make a connection with the text. I have examined some other peoples blogs and have found where my mistakes are. I am at the moment still flustered with new ideas to improve the blog. I can say that I am satisfied with the progress so far.

Visual Success

In this picture, we can see that the message is very clear. By putting up the cover of Michael Jackson's cd, we know that they are promoting his album. The audience should have no problem figuring out exactly what the message is. Its simple, go out and by Micheal's album!!!!!!!

Visual Miscue (Misunderstood)!!!!!

This is a visual of the new face for the Sony Ericsson phone. I was reading a statement where a person had said that they thought that the advertisement was for the model alone. They continued to say that later on, they realized the connection the model and the phone had. Despite, the words on the ad, sometimes we can confuse our audience if our pictures dont coincide with the our words.

An example of My Ad

My Type of Ad

For the final project, I plan to do an Ad on the newest DVD that Sony will be offering to customers who can produce their own ringtones. I will market this ad through the internet, the television commercials, and also through the ads in the newspaper. I would like the Ad to be directed to consumers of all ages but specifically for the consumers with creative minds.

A recommendation for a friend

Dear Sam,

I have been enjoying some great music for the past three months and it has all been because of Sony. 8 out of 10 of the artists that I have listened to are all under SONY'S labels and they have been terrific. Stop being unsatisfied with the cd's that you have been buying. They are reliable and you will walk away feeling like you have definitely spent your money in the right place. Another great reason to stick to SONY'S artists is that you can write them about any questions that you would have and they will get back to you in no time. Its worth the time, trust me.

Yours Truly,

Jaleesa Josiah

Memo of congratulations

Dear Sony,

I would like to conratulate you on the success you have gained over the past couple of months. In SONY'S creative department, it shows the hard work and dedication that has been put into the projects. Congratulations on releasing 1000 ringtones, a new DVD containing a collection of ringtones grouped into music, sound effects, and spoken word categories. The fans seem pleased. Continue to work hard and even bigger things will come your way.


Yours Truly,

Jaleesa Josiah